kia ora hunter, the story is really sad. I like how you a title and the real story in the description. Maybe next time you could add more description and more story by Jacob.
KIA Ora hunter I liked the way you told me how it feels moving to a new home. maybe you could tell us a bit more. Next time you could add a bit more detail. check out my blog.
Hello hunter I really like this story for many reasons and let me tell you why. The way you described the story made me picture it in my head and it was very good. I really like how you took a sad but also happy kind of story to make. Maybe next you could say how you came up with the words you used And how long did it take you to make it?
Kia ora Hunter, My name is Josh and I am from belfast school. I really enjoy this post because of the feeling's you used in this, I do understand this becuase this has happend to me before many times. maybe next time you could add a bit more o make it intrersting. From Josh<
That's cool. I like your background. How long did it take?
ReplyDeleteGood post, the background is cool and it works with the mood of the poem
ReplyDeletekia ora hunter, the story is really sad. I like how you a title and the real story in the description. Maybe next time you could add more description and more story by Jacob.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora hunter
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told me how it feels moving to a new home.
maybe you could tell us a bit more.
Next time you could add a bit more detail.
check out my blog.
Hello hunter I really like this story for many reasons and let me tell you why. The way you described the story made me picture it in my head and it was very good. I really like how you took a sad but also happy kind of story to make. Maybe next you could say how you came up with the words you used And how long did it take you to make it?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hunter,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Josh and I am from belfast school.
I really enjoy this post because of the feeling's you used in this, I do understand this becuase this has happend to me before many times.
maybe next time you could add a bit more o make it intrersting.
From Josh<